Friday 18 March 2016

Tayla's flag persuasion

I think we should keep the new zealand flag because it has been in nz for a long time and the war people wear it in the war and the war people don't want to change it and i think it is no point of changing it because it is worth a lot of money and i like the nz flag i  am not up for the change because i like the nz flag i don't want to cage it i am angry that the started this debate anyway it is really dumb that they started this so that's why i think we should not change the flag so if you want to change that fls then go ahead because it is a very special flag but i stick up for the people that don't want to change the flag that's why i don't want to change the nz  flag 


 

3 comments:

  1. Nice persuasion Tayla. My two wishes for you is to re-read your writing and make sure you add in full stops or commas because I ran out of breath.
    Other then that is was really good
    From Brooke

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  2. I agree with you Tayla.
    I like your full stops and captial letters.
    I think you could write a little bit more.
    but every thing esle is good.

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  3. I agree with you Tayla.
    I like your full stops and captial letters.
    I think you could write a little bit more.
    but every thing esle is good.

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