Brookes writing- the little goldfish

The little goldfish- free writing

Long ago there was a little goldfish named Bertram, he was a free goldfish because he lived in the ocean. Bertram was 3 years old in human years and 56 in goldfish. He had a orange body and a white tail with a pink face. 

One day Bertram went on a adventure to find some friends because he was very lonely , on the way he spotted a humongous castle but Bertram made the wrong decision to go inside...

Inside the castle there were several cobwebs with about 6 spiders on them. He entered another room and there was a massive tank full of little big sharks. The sharks saw Bertram and pushed as hard as they could to break the tank to get to Bertram and it worked. Bertram swam as fast as he could but the Sharks were too fast and he got eaten, but the good thing is that after a while he came out as seaweed at the bottom of the ocean. 

Bertram felt very good actually because there were lots of sea animals and if they were small animals they could hide in or behind Bertram. He could also live forever if the killer whale doesn't come around because they eat seaweed but of they are really hungry they eat anything in their sight.

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