Emma Topyia
Emma topiya is an island yet to be discovered it has tropical fruits.beautiful flowers and sandy
beaches with coconut trees and Lovely warm seas with the hot sun. Also there are Dolphins that everybody can ride. But underneath the water there is a castle and only the swan family can get the special seaweed that turns them into mermaids and mermen.but on the other side of the island there is a evil family called the evils they have there own castle made out of black sand there is seaweed but they can not turn into mermaid or merman.
also in Emma topyia there are the cutest chickens in the world and the colors are black and white.in Emma topiya everybody reads a book upside down and the letters are linked and written in Emma topiyen.also nobody dies in Emma topiya and there is magic.
Awesome Emma love your work. But remember to include spaces after your full stops and capital letters
ReplyDeleteZoe
Very good punctuation and imagination but you need to work on not using and so much but using different words
ReplyDeletePixie