Tuesday 29 March 2016

Joseph's writing -Iron Man

Iron man 

Iron man was a great big metal machine. He went around people's farms eating all the machinery on their farms. The people realised that all their machinery was gone and they had had enough! They set a trap for Iron man. The men and women dug a deep hole in the ground and covered it up with branches and sticks. Then they put a truck on the branches and sticks. When iron man comes he will see the truck and go to get the truck and he will fall into the hole. Iron man doesn't fall into the hole. He reaches over the hole and grabs the truck and eats it right away.

The people called the army. The army got all the best men and women and missiles. The people did not know Iron man's powers and his powers are regeneration. So if he gets blown up all of his parts will come back to him. The people think Iron man is a bad alien but he is not bad. Iron man just wants to live a peaceful life.

Iron man comes from the planet of Ferrous. The planet is completely made of Iron and there is always plenty to eat and there are lava lakes. Iron man went to earth to find more iron even though they have enough iron already. Why would they need more Iron? Maybe they need iron for homes or they need iron to make more iron men and women and children? (Find out in iron man 2)

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