When I am older I want to be a professional football player like Messi and Ronaldo. Every day I wish for it. I like playing because I play every day. I normally play with my neighbor Flynn. He's only five but he is still really good. We like to play penalty shootout. Lots of my other friends like playing football.
My other favourite sport is cricket. I love batting. I have to wear lots of protective gear. I normally like to hit them big. I think the black caps are the best. My friend Jordan mills had an uncle in the team called Kyle mills. Once I got player of the year.
I like how you put paragraphs in you story and your capital letters and full stops but you should make it more exciting
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