Charlie's writing - Dragon Slayer

Here is chapter 1 of Charlie's latest novel.  Can you give him some feedback? Try giving two stars (things he has done well) and one wish (thing he can work on).

Dragon slayer

Chapter one new land

Dustin jolted forward as his boat hit the shore of the new land, he jumped of and pulled out his constructio rifle, he looked around, the coast was clear. Dustin gave the signal, a ramp came down from the ship.The crew and a horse drawn wagon came down from it, when everything was down they moved through the bush ( most of the sailors were armed with two constructio bombs and a turbo shot gun they also had a small axe so they could cut through the bush).Dustin normally wears black and he always wears a mask in the shape of a skull, one of the eye holes has ex ray vision and the other has metal bars over it.

As they moved Dustin and the crew couldn't help noticing a howl that was dangerously close. Then out of the mist came a massive white wolf with paws as big as a human head. Then somehow it said what do you seek on our island? In a growly voice the crew were too stunned to talk but they didn't notice what Dustin noticed they were surrounded by the wolves. Then it said what do you seek? Does nobody understand me? then finally Dustin said yes

The all of a sudden it pounced onto Dustin and pinned him down the said said then answer me! we have come make a colony on this new land answered Dustin. Okay then you are so dead it said, how Dustin said back Dragons.