A long time ago actually last Friday Kelly was ready to start a normal boring day at school. But today the sky looked a bit creepy but Kelly just ignored it. When she stepped foot in school she knew it was going to be a long day. Her teacher was at her desk as usual. Ms Chalk was the meanest teacher in school.
The bell went and Jess sat at her desk Ms Chalk said that it was time for Math. Kelly’s day was getting worse. Ms Chalk was writing something on the board…POP QUIZ ! Great Kelly had already got several bad grades in math and now she was going to get another. Surprisingly she got an A+.
It was lunch time some boys were bugging Kelly so she threw some food at them next thing she knew she was in the detention room. When she got home her mum said that they were going to California for 3 months so she didn't have to go to school this was Kelly's worst day turned into her best day. THE END
Nice story Jess!!
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This is some useful feedback from Brooke, she has told you two positive stars and one wish which I agree with, I'm interested to know who Jess is.
ReplyDeleteThis is some useful feedback from Brooke, she has told you two positive stars and one wish which I agree with, I'm interested to know who Jess is.
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